|Reviews for that black|
| StalkerFan chapter 1 . 7/6/2011
Hot and sick and dark and crazy. absolutely my kind of story. REALLY f*ed up, but REALLY good. inthat OMG awesome terrible kind of way
| hi chapter 1 . 3/27/2010
its always interesting (in a sad and sick way) to read it from this percpective
| failte200 chapter 1 . 11/22/2006
Uhm... yeah. That's a lil' dark. Oh, good... excellent even but for the lack of any spark of redemption or hope. I.E. - dark.
Lesse yer other stories and see if you're always like this...
| Modern Actide chapter 1 . 6/18/2006
Lords, you're a good writer.
I've read all you fiction now, but I love the one-shots the most.
They make me want to cry, but I still love them.
| genny marie chapter 1 . 11/14/2004
THIS WAS ABSOULTELY AMAZING
it was amazing
you have a way with slash -
| subtleline chapter 1 . 8/29/2004
Well, this is one of the first fics I've read written from the rapist point of view. Very interesting. Very well written. Very well done. I like it.
| Hortie chapter 1 . 12/24/2003
Whoa. This was pretty hot. :D Your style is solid (need I even mention grammatical correctness et al?) and I like the second person POV. I'm just a sucker for darkfic and domineering sadists. Yum!
| Anoyo chapter 1 . 8/23/2003
Very good. You have a certain nack for the second perspective. The explaining away and non-regret of the actions was all quite realistic. Love gone bad; you somehow took a much worked-upon and stereotypical story idea and made it something to ponder. Job very well done.
| LoveSasa chapter 1 . 6/27/2003
Wow... Just... wow.
| Triste Vara chapter 1 . 5/18/2003
That was a little...disturbing. But very good. Like you said, it was raw, but still, very good.
| succubusbroad chapter 1 . 4/22/2003
I liked it. There aren't enough rape fics out there, thanks.
| Jennifer L. Rawles chapter 1 . 4/12/2003
sick but good fic
| demonic-muses chapter 1 . 4/11/2003
Wowza.. me likes... :D very dark. but very good. yes yes! bwahah.. me likes alot alot alot.
| Emmasj chapter 1 . 4/10/2003
Damn... That was... Well, I feel bad about liking that, but I do. It was a very well written story. Good job. You scare me.
| sista' blacksheep chapter 1 . 4/8/2003
that's so sad...wow. Very impressive. you are very gifted at conveying a visual story completed with an intense and unusual amount of well expressed feelings. It was very convincing..or at least for me since I know a friend who's brother did the same thing to him.. or at least the same thing according to what I gather form our conversations. Thanx for posting this, it was good to finally see the other side to an abusive relationship as opposed to just the victim's point of view. Now I know...if what you write is generally true. Keep up the good work author!