It was a beautiful poem keep writing

this i think is true. i like your theory. :) plz R&R some of my work if u hae some free time, id like to hear your oppinion.

ps- Reside: Banchory (a little town in scotland, and if you dont know where that is, you are probably American) u said this in ur profile and i hate that! i am an american and we all aren't the jackasses others make us seem.

Oh, so hateful! I love it! It's so true though, sometimes it just feel so good to hate. I love this poem because it brings out a feeling that most people try to hide, but that is in everyone. So it truely is an awesome peom. My favorite lines were "You took me, my love, my pain/But you shall never have my hate." It's such a great line. If you had ended it there, that would have been a really powerful, but then again, if you had ended it there then we'd have missed my other favorite line "So you sink below the ground/and all I can do is laugh" Oh... this poem is awesome... in fact... I'm putting it on the favorites list. I don't know, something about it... maybe it's because it reminds me of me so much... but really, this is perfect! Keep writing!

I love the poem. It's beautiful in a way. Though I probably would write something like it. Keep it up! Very nice work!

*Applauds* Gorgeous poem, I enjoyed it. :-)