|Reviews for Disarray|
| Look Im Sparkling chapter 5 . 4/22/2010
did you give the story up? you really shouldnt have done that D: I really liked it and i wanna know what happens... oh well i just gotta make something up in my mind then
| Technicolour Vibrato chapter 5 . 12/11/2004
I lurve it! _ Keep up with the good work!
| Triste-et-seul chapter 5 . 6/6/2004
I know you haven't worked on this in a while but please finish... I love the story so far.
| Esquirella chapter 5 . 10/31/2003
You are going to finish this, aren't you?
| FamousOneLiners chapter 5 . 9/8/2003
this story kicks ass, and love the slash
| firess chapter 5 . 7/27/2003
i like this, write more, please? is uh damian gona get not so prepish and noying later? and i think its neat that u spelled his name as kris, thats my name, except mine has 2 ...good one though!
| Cannibalistic Smurf chapter 5 . 5/22/2003
YAY! you made the next chappy (and only a day after I read it!) ...me so happy now! :) (and I'll make sure never to misspell damian.)
| Cannibalistic Smurf chapter 2 . 5/21/2003
hehe, your right, damian is being a prissy bitch so far, but then again, kris is also just being a meanie so far (he tried to apologize, and he probrobly has a good reason to be a meanie, but I digress)
| Autumn tears chapter 5 . 5/20/2003
Yay! Super awesome-ness! Haha. Thank God my school isnt like that one, I think I'd go crazy. The eye things very cool. I like Kyle though, whats up with him? Hm... More soon? Please?
| aassss chapter 1 . 4/22/2003
please write more soon. i cant wait to see what happens.
| rainingxflames chapter 5 . 4/16/2003
Yay, another chapter. And! Kris has eyes that change colour. ::fangirl scream:: Um. Anyway. I love the way the plot's developing. Also, the relationship between Damian and Kris is absolutely -FANTASTIC-! I love the sort-of dislike between them, because it makes every time they talk to each other civilly even better, if that made any sense at all. Also, I'm glad the last comment I left boosted your ego, because it SHOULD have done, because I love your story and the characters are so likeable, except for Marc . Grr..
Also, you mentioned Anything Goes. Possibly one of the best musicals in the world ever, the music is wonderful.
Anyway, sorry for rambling. Just know that I love the story and I want more soon. Now, if possible. Get writing.
| Raymond o-O chapter 5 . 4/11/2003
Sorry Wolfie :)
Hahaha- I just re-read some of my reviews~ I'm one of those people who spell it Damien! (Ah!~ Noo~) ANYWAYS, I spell it right in the 3rd review ;) That's good.
Goota say, I love the scenes in the cafeteria~ They're always so cool in their own way. And Karen seems like a really nice person (kinda like someone I know). Good job~ I'll look forward to your next one ;)
| Raymond o-O chapter 4 . 4/11/2003
Whoa~ Hi Wolfie :)
Nice chapter, I gotta say :) Makes me smile. I dunno why but this story just draws me in somehow :) I like that~ The baby Tommy seems really cute... M Marshmallows ;) Damian's character is nicely coming along... :) Gonna go read the next chapter~
| Ch-Chris chapter 5 . 4/7/2003
Hey Dani, Good Story. I like how you transfer from scenario to scenario. You also are good at managing time within the story. I think Karen(A Cabbage Patch Doll) and Brandon (Mother Thereasea) are cool kyles cool. Marc and Tina re dum mybe theyll die ::gigles:. Um job keep up the good work.
| DollyMarie chapter 5 . 4/6/2003
i really like this story. hope u update soon.