| Reviews for Disarray |
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  natalie chapter 5 . 4/6/2003 hey, great story! your characters are really well written... i especially love kyle, he's such a cutie! come back soon with the next chapter... |
 Rockfamous chapter 4 . 4/6/2003 Hey there! Great story...Loved it! I sure want to read some more...Would you write more chapters anytime soon? I like Kris a lot, and that GAP thing's hillarious. Love it...See ya! |
| rainingxflames chapter 4 . 4/6/2003 Great! :D You created a nice, well-rounded load of characters. The storyline's shaping up well, and you're a great writer which helps so much. Sometimes you get a great plot but crappy writing, or great writing but crappy plot, but in this you've got a great plot AND you write well. ::applauds, sticks gold star on your forehead, and adds story to favourites list:: |
| Hermharry chapter 3 . 4/6/2003 this is really good write on! |
| Raymond o-O chapter 3 . 4/6/2003 Yo Wolfie :) Nice chapter two. I know you seemed like you kinda not liked writing it and thought it was boring crap, but I liked it... :) Damien and his friends kinda remind me of my friends, I think this was a good developement chapter :) I enjoyed reading it... I dunno why, but reading about peoples lives (real or fictional) is interesting :) Keep on going ok? I'm gonna wait for chapter 3 :P -Alex S |
| Raymond o-O chapter 2 . 4/6/2003 Hey Wolfie :) Lol, don't mind if I call you that right? Hehe, I like your story alot. Damien is so cool... (lol) I've only read the first chapter, but I like it already... Damien's fashion sense is like mine, lol... I have alot of GAP clothes- I dunno, I guess I just like their baseball-T's :D Anyways, I hope you write more, I'm gonna go keep reading ;) -Alex S. |
| White Raven chapter 1 . 4/5/2003 hehehehe mind if i use that GAP thing in my story? HA! thats funny! |
| GoTHiK-FReEK chapter 3 . 4/5/2003 I really like how this story's turning out and chapter two was great, really, don't worry about it. Your character, Damian really, REALLY reminds me of my older brother. They are identical in so many ways it's creepy. Right down to the yellow GAP shirt. Which makes it kind of strange hilarious for me to read about him with another guy in later chapters. Anyways, sorry for the pointless ramble I just wanted to tell you that your story's great and that you should definatly continue. Well, that's it for me, Jessika |
| Alle chapter 3 . 4/5/2003 I like it so far, looking forward to your next update. |