Reviews for FlipFlops and Pink Umbrellas
Melissa Norvell chapter 3 . 3/2/2009
That was a nice end to a rather cute story. The only problem here was your formatting, other then that I really liked it. I'll place it on my favorites list. Great job!
Melissa Norvell chapter 2 . 3/2/2009
Your first chapter is decently written but you should make smaller paragraphs instead of leaving them in such mass. There should also be space between dialogue and description.

Other then that, you have a pretty good story here.
Melissa Norvell chapter 1 . 3/2/2009
This is a very good start so far. Something short and poetic. I'll be sure to review your other chapters as well. If you wish or have the time, please review some of my works. You might like them.
tbsfan chapter 3 . 4/5/2005
hm...it looks like you're a taking back sunday fan, too.

that was shameless, by the way. you know what im talking about.

"its times like these when silence means everything."

write for yourself, loser. you're not worthy of being a tbs fan...
hushed whispers chapter 3 . 1/22/2005
All of a sudden, your story wants me to sing in the rain. It's plucky and carefree, but it has that zest to it that makes the world stop all together.

-Kimberly-
PoeticRagdoll chapter 3 . 5/16/2004
good story :D
Karasu no sei chapter 3 . 4/6/2004
This is really good!
You should do more stories... _
I would like to know what happens next, but you've finished it really well and the title was entirely suitable.
Cookie please?
~Karasu
Karasu no sei chapter 1 . 4/6/2004
Aah... lovely imagery.
The lure of the cookie is too much for my poor mind to suppress!
GIVE ME THE COKKIE!
~Karasu
Me chapter 2 . 3/26/2004
whoa please write more! It sounds lioke it will turn out to be an awsome story.
RACHEL S chapter 3 . 3/19/2004
OMG! This is so sad. I cried.. and I cry everytime I read it...:(
Little Mage chapter 3 . 2/1/2004
I like it. It'd be great if you could expand it and go on. I want to know more.
unknown chapter 3 . 1/17/2004
Ok This is like really good but what happened to the boy did he live or what?
Lady Sunlight chapter 3 . 1/4/2004
Damn men and their manly pride.
Not so Average chapter 3 . 1/1/2004
Amazing. The wording was flawless, the characters were real, the storyline was interesting and realistic. I LOVED it. Please continue, I'm dying to know more about this!
punkrockprincess900 chapter 3 . 12/28/2003
I love this fic, i think you should write a real fic, i mean like a long one ya know cause its really good i like it alot...KEEP UP THE AWESOME WORK
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