Reviews for Invisible Love
Pose For Me chapter 1 . 1/17/2004
I doubt it is what you wanted the poem to represent, but for me, when I read this poem, it reminded me of a dream sort. You know how people dream of celebrites and are so said "in love" with them? Well, I went back to a dream that I had with one of my so-said celebrities and it was like what was said in the poem. We were together but then he disappeared. [waking up is a drag!] And for you're couple of last lines "I never knew you, And doubt I ever will." It totally goes back to the celebrity thing! See, I told you it probably had nothing to do with what you were going for the poem to mean. Eh, oh well.
Regina O.B.
Pa-Ja-Mas1 chapter 1 . 4/26/2003
hm...i sorda understood it, pretty good makes me feel kinda weird but i guess thats a good thing keep it up