Reviews for We All Have Our Demons |
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![]() ![]() ![]() 0_o She has the same birthday as me... Not the year, but my birthday is November 16. Damn - what were the chances of that?! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow... this is an amazing story! I love how you have written it. At first everything seemed so real, something that could happen in real life and then all of the sudden everything turned into fantasy. I must admit I didn't expect this fatansy turn. I can't say it kept me on the edge of my seat, BUT I was very thankfull I had some spare time, enough time to read it whole, because I just couldn't stop reading it! I'm so very anxious about the chapters that are to follow these! Please, update as soon as you can! You have a fan here ;) Also I hope you have a nice time at college (read the Author's Note) and I really hope everything works out for you! You are a very talentated writer and I really enjoy your work! Don't let all this talent go to waste and keep writing whenever you get the chance! Sorry for the long comment, I'll stop now P Take care and best wishes, Ilinca *hug* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hiya, I read this a while ago, but my computer was being a bitch and wouldn't let me review, so here I am to urge you to write more! Loki-sama |
![]() ![]() ![]() "The slightly cool air coming from the open window made his flesh rise deliciously." I absolutely LOVE how you said that. Nice work! Still reading.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well I must say this story is coming around rather nicely. Although that was quite the nasty little cliffie. *shrugs* I love ya anyway... Sorry I haven't been keeping up, and I haven't been reviewing much. -_-; a little cramped, but I'm catching up with everything. Wow, your comp's giving you quite a bit of trouble huh? Man, mine just kicks me off, nothing wrong with the keyboard... thank god. Well, keep writing and update soon... oh and I'll be rooting and voting for u in elimination! Peachez _~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Don't worry! Take your time. I think everyone deserves a break when they've worked hard. I'm in high school too and it's draining the energy out of me. Though I do want you to update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Teriffic story! It's realistic, believable, and its got me hooked! ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! What a twisted cliffhanger! Great plot twist about the past of Peter. I just wonder what terrible things they could bring to the world. Really hope that you could update soon. BTW good luck in college! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh... what's happening? A big plot twist is about to happen. I can feel it. Once again, great job. I'll read the rest. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! The pacing of the story is excellent although I thought that chapter 5 could have been combined with other chapters. But I do love your characters (even the 'other' personalities). I'll try to read a bit more later. See ya! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Add me to the long list of your fans because this work of yours spooked me since chapter 1. I'll let the night pass through and read the rest tomorrow when the sun is up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh...do come back... I liked the end of that chapter. I'd sort of guessed it earlier but still...it was great. Good luck with college and everything. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah I'm stil reading it and loving it. You write in the mindset of a crazy person perfectly. They put me in a crazy hospital once (bah I have no idea why) and...they were all like that. Only some were creepier. And anyway. I'd rather think happier thoughts. Flowers and stuff. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this, this is awesome! You are so talented, I'm jealous. Blah, I'm telling you, publish it! I feel bad reading it and not paying you anything. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dude, that was great. It was so good, I felt it was worth a review with correct punctuation. I love your style of writing, and I love the way Eliza hasn't yet been made out to be a Mary-Sue with her flowing chestnut locks and beautiful green eyes that seemed to be constantly enraptured with the world etc etc. Yeah. Go get this published. Quickly! Don't post anymore on here, just publish it! |