The hint of something sinister...*dramatic music plays* i love it! i hope you will update again soon. this stroy is very intruging. :)

i totally LOVE this story. seriously, i come on everyday just to see if you've written more. you should get a publisher for this!

interesting. more. much more. much much . very soon. very very soon. more soon

Interesting.

ah! Chills, fantastic and wonderful chills.

Thank you for writing another tantalizing chapter. Love it! Happy Hunting.

Very interesting storyline, as well as the insanity angle. Keep it up!

Btw, I'm Seekerofknowledge on the Astral Society site. Can we trade notes?

This is amazing, the characters are beautifully well described and developed. This is very much a movie-playing-in-your-head-type story.

Very cool, keep it up! *grin*

Torture. You are very good at it. Please update soon. Love your story. Happy Hunting.

Great chapter! A good place to add the dialog of the personalities, it will stay fresh in my mind as I move to the next one.

~Kallah

She's a smart little thing, isn't she? I can almost see this being played out in movie form. I love seeing characters give each other a run for their money.

~Kallah

This is captivating me! So far, your descriptions are great, and dialog even better. I am going to continue with this right away.

Intriguing girl.

On I go...

*looks amazed* this is incredibly! wow! whena re you gonna update next! this story has completely sucked me into it. it's very interesting. i can't wait to read more!

Cool I like this very much! I'm looking forward to more!

Holy shit this is some good writing! You put some of those other writers to shame! Where in the world did you come up with such an excellent plot? I was lured in by your story and at first I though I'd only read a little. But of course, it was so good I ended up reading all three chapters. If there'd been four, I'd have read that one too! Keep writing this story and I guarantee I'll keep reading!