I love it so far. Keep writing. Happy Hunting.

Eliza seems like a really interesting and refreshing character for a psychic. Would be sweet to get her POV sometime, would be fun. :)

P.S.: Just read your bio. Ever gave a visit? PM me there; my nick is Shrike.

Hey. This story is great... Love it. :)

So, I own an RP group called "Heresis" There are only me and one other person so far and we need ppl. Email me if your interested and I'll tell you all about it alright?

-Daron

OOh. I really like the way this story's going. Very interesting.

very interesting and well written. i love anything about mental disorders, so this one really caught my eye.

i would, however, reccomend u double space between paragraphs (coz this site doesn't recognize indentations) and either read through the chapter after you're done, have someone else do it for you, or both. this will reduce the amount typos/bad grammar/awkward phrases/etc that are bound to happen as you process your thoughts onto paper, the computer screen or whatever u use to do your writing.

all things considered, though, this was a good story. can't wait to see more.

Hm this is very intruiging. It really is. A murderer and a wtich? Sounds fun! Ill look for more!

i love the ending for this chapter.

absolutely brilliant.

continue!

Interesting...although I think it would be better if you use MS Word or MS FrontPage

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Kishi Seta

FINISH THE STORY FOR ME! ITS GREAT!