Reviews for Dying And Smiling
Pound chapter 1 . 6/28/2003
major advice: you cant just... rearrange what you said before and call it a poem

i think... ive really gotten the deeper meaning in this...

i want to die while i smile yet lie...or something like that

incredibly immature... and bad. it was bad.
Gauy chapter 1 . 6/12/2003
I don't know if I get this poem, but I like it. Somehow, I think it fits me.
Carter Tachikawa chapter 1 . 5/25/2003
Confusing but in a good way. I like the contrast to this one. Keep it up.

Someone Out There Cares chapter 1 . 5/13/2003
wow...that was a cool comparison
Smoky Bear chapter 1 . 5/11/2003
nice word play
Notyouraveragebedtimestory chapter 1 . 5/7/2003
Confusing.. never read a poem with this contast in it. But me like.
broken wings241 chapter 1 . 4/26/2003
Heh, confusingly brilliant work...
Rose Dark Thorn chapter 1 . 4/24/2003
Yes, that is true. I hate lies so much, but I have to lie all the time. Kind of ironic isn't it?
Impressionist chapter 1 . 4/10/2003
yes. that is true. and I can't think of anything coherant to say right well done and I'll leave it at that.

obsidian katana chapter 1 . 4/7/2003
cool, i like this! short and simple, nicely put. good job! keep on writing!
The Crazy Cricket chapter 1 . 4/6/2003
Kinda of confusing, but really, what are poems for? I get the deeper meaning to this. (Of course, I'm not telling you what that is. _) Great job. Short and sweet. I liked it.
Jade6 chapter 1 . 4/6/2003
Oh, interesting take... I liked the contrast this piece held.