Reviews for My California Angel |
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![]() ![]() Wow, another character like me. _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I find adelle and zoey monents to be adorable and amusing :) arghh stupid boys :p are glass soda bottles even common? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Seems a bit overdramatic at times, but it's quirky in a way and gives a really powerful visual, I can imagine it unfolding easily. Interesting so far though. |
![]() ![]() i love where this is going,(well i love reading it lool) im kinda wishing shed never tell her friend how she feels its too sad to know whats goa happen next. D: |
![]() ![]() The first chapter was really good, i got straight into it! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, that's sweet of Adelle. I like Zoey's last name, too. It just rolls off my tongue. The woman who was surprised by Zoey and Adelle made me laugh, especially when the other gay couple started getting more intimate. XD Hilarious. A bit cheesy right there, but it was sweet. That woman WAS really nice. It'd be cool if Adelle and Zoey met another gay couple there. It'd probably make things a bit easier for them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've come upon this story very late, but it has caught my attention. I will continue reading. |
![]() ![]() ![]() For some reason it seems a bit rushed, but I can't pinpoint what it is that makes me feel that way. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The big moment, where she tells her parents her plans. Getting right to reading that in the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So this is how it all ends. Fantastic ) Will you be interested in writing more stories such as these? This makes me want to go back to some old fanfiction that's been sitting around... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please, tell me it's not over! What happens next? Will Adelle get past this detachment? AH! Update please! |
![]() ![]() Here's another review for you after so many years. That was an extremely powerful ending. It was also totally unexpected after reading the previous 19 chapters. Don't update, if you do, you take the mystery out of the ending. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like this |
![]() ![]() ![]() So, I just read the entire story and it was one of the nicest couple hours of my...well, that I've had in a while. This is a really good story, and you really should finish it. I bet this is the first review you've had in a while since you haven't updated in two years, but i KNOW that isn't the end, so PLEASE finish it. At least I will read it, if not the people who left the other 122 reviews. It's so good! And it's not over yet! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i loved this story as a whole but the ending sort of...shattered it. idk. it was too abrupt |