Reviews for My California Angel
Guest chapter 2 . 8/24/2013
Wow, another character like me. _
Affair chapter 9 . 7/15/2011
I find adelle and zoey monents to be adorable and amusing :) arghh stupid boys :p are glass soda bottles even common?
Affair chapter 2 . 7/14/2011
Seems a bit overdramatic at times, but it's quirky in a way and gives a really powerful visual, I can imagine it unfolding easily. Interesting so far though.
mojo chapter 2 . 10/1/2009
i love where this is going,(well i love reading it lool) im kinda wishing shed never tell her friend how she feels its too sad to know whats goa happen next.

D:
mojo chapter 1 . 10/1/2009
The first chapter was really good, i got straight into it!

:)
jquackers chapter 7 . 8/1/2009
Aww, that's sweet of Adelle. I like Zoey's last name, too. It just rolls off my tongue.

The woman who was surprised by Zoey and Adelle made me laugh, especially when the other gay couple started getting more intimate. XD Hilarious.

A bit cheesy right there, but it was sweet.

That woman WAS really nice. It'd be cool if Adelle and Zoey met another gay couple there. It'd probably make things a bit easier for them.
The Melchii chapter 2 . 7/4/2009
I've come upon this story very late, but it has caught my attention. I will continue reading.
jquackers chapter 2 . 7/4/2009
For some reason it seems a bit rushed, but I can't pinpoint what it is that makes me feel that way.
jquackers chapter 1 . 7/4/2009
The big moment, where she tells her parents her plans. Getting right to reading that in the next chapter.
noclipgod25 chapter 21 . 3/12/2009
So this is how it all ends. Fantastic )

Will you be interested in writing more stories such as these?

This makes me want to go back to some old fanfiction that's been sitting around...
hybrid calling chapter 20 . 5/26/2008
Please, tell me it's not over! What happens next? Will Adelle get past this detachment? AH! Update please!
Believe the Lie chapter 20 . 3/23/2008
Here's another review for you after so many years.

That was an extremely powerful ending. It was also totally unexpected after reading the previous 19 chapters. Don't update, if you do, you take the mystery out of the ending.
outsidersgirl chapter 1 . 7/11/2007
i like this
thegirlisgonenow chapter 20 . 6/10/2007
So, I just read the entire story and it was one of the nicest couple hours of my...well, that I've had in a while. This is a really good story, and you really should finish it. I bet this is the first review you've had in a while since you haven't updated in two years, but i KNOW that isn't the end, so PLEASE finish it. At least I will read it, if not the people who left the other 122 reviews. It's so good! And it's not over yet!
AROSEO chapter 1 . 5/1/2006
i loved this story as a whole but the ending sort of...shattered it. idk. it was too abrupt
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