|Reviews for The End|
| Sanction90 chapter 1 . 6/20/2004
This is amazing! I love dark and depressing stories, in my opinion, every real life story is. I'm going to be showing this to the few friends that I have and see if they like it. I'm sure they will, it's so great! Keep up the awesome work!
| Werecat99 chapter 1 . 9/21/2003
Definitely dark, but well written.
One comment, though: Formatting a story as one huge paragraph makes it hard to read. Perhaps you might consider changing that.
Apart from that, a nice story.
| devilsangel2 chapter 1 . 4/6/2003
yes indeed a depressing story. Well written, although it could be a little less casual. Somehow stops the flow of reading. Also, the plot seems to lack a bit of reality...otherwise, GJ GJ. Never stop writing!