Reviews for Haunted
Yellow Roses chapter 24 . 8/12/2006
i just read this entire thing in one sitting and i think its really good. Well done.
Eve chapter 8 . 1/31/2004
I was bored... rereading this seemed like a... I dunno... Either way, I hope you don't have too many regrets- especially after all of this. I miss it too ya know. (now the question is what? Friendship? Truth? or Innocence?)
Damaged chapter 1 . 7/8/2003
This is beautiful! This entire story is awesome! It catches you in the beginning and holds you until you finish! Awesome work! Keep writing!
evilpenguinofdoom chapter 24 . 6/28/2003
oh...good story...its good you didn't let her kill herself...write more stories!
evilpenguinofdoom chapter 23 . 6/28/2003
oh...good i'll read the next chapter and review in three to 10 mins
Fairy chapter 24 . 6/11/2003
Wow, this was a good ending. I really liked how you put so much emotion in.
Fairy chapter 8 . 6/11/2003
This is interesting, but the beginning was rather predictable. Maybe I'm just paradoid, but I figured it was rape from the very beginning. Good job with Vicki's feelings, though-quite vivid.
californiaone chapter 24 . 6/9/2003
ah! good ending...if you had her kill herself I would have been muy angry. but it was good the way you had it turn out...everthing didn't get better all of a sudden but she realizes life is worth living for the happy moments...

good message (boy, I;m strange today)

nice job on the story! keep writing
Joan D'Arc chapter 24 . 6/2/2003
I am so sad that its over! :(. I wish that this story could go on forever. I love it! I am so glad that she didnt kill herself at the end. That would have been really sad. Thanks for writing this story! It was certainly entertaining. Pleez start another story soon!
Incruentus chapter 24 . 5/31/2003
Wow, this was a really good story. It made me cry when I was reading the last couple of chapters. I can't really say much. It was amazing.
Mindi chapter 24 . 5/30/2003
another great review...
Wooffles chapter 24 . 5/30/2003
HALLELUIAH! She's alive!

There is hope for the world...

Okay, sorry throughout the story I seemed hellbent on her getting out alive, but...

I think everyone deserves to live.

And, the cutting part scared me half to death as well as the rape part but that's something else all together.

All I'm going to say is that the DAY after I read Chapter 22, I went to school and my best friend had three cuts on her wrist. She made them with plastic swords because, yeah, she's depressed. Fortunately her razor is one of those "impossible to cut yourself on" ones...

So, that's why I got kinda mad about Vicki cutting. You didn't need to know just thought I'd explain.

Great story and I hope to see more writing from you! Peace out.
Seremela Minyatur chapter 24 . 5/29/2003
wow! i did like it! and i still feel so bad that i was on the other line. but it was a long distance phone call! im so sry! and u put the grass part in lol! and what do mean a little fact and a lot fiction? isnt it the other way around? :)
quietdrama22 chapter 24 . 5/29/2003
Ok its me again-quietdrama22-

I just read the Epilogue, and I think its great the Vickie didnt die- the fact of why she didint die (But I decided to live, and I need to accept that decision. Because no matter how much I deny it, someone has to care whether I live or die, and I'd hurt them more if I left than if I stayed. So I stayed among the living. So life has its bad moments. But the moments of fun and happiness. Maybe through enough moments of fun and happiness, the bad ones will fade from my memories. Who knows?)

You are a good writer, this is a good story, and... sequel?

: )
quietdrama22 chapter 23 . 5/29/2003
oh God... I am actually shaking as I write the review (and not because of the chill in my room), I just read your story today and WOW...

Good story (the subject is um... sad- not in a bad way)... cliffhangers

: ),

and realistic. You have achived the

I-am-going-to-barf-why-do-I-read-this-type-of-fiction feeling I get after reading good "angsty" stories.

Anyways... keep on writing : )
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