Reviews for Forever After
Thomasina Aquina1 chapter 2 . 5/31/2003
I like this story. You have a good start, but you might want to do a little work on your voice. Sometimes your narrator is plainspoken in a way that suggests not so much honesty but only vague conviction of what happens. What that sentence was trying to convey was that sometimes details or different wordings on dialogue would do this story wonders. Even so, nice work.
ashfklasdfjklasdfasjklfdjaskdl chapter 2 . 5/9/2003
Ah! What a wonderful story! Please hurry and continue! Zinia is great, I can't wait to see what happens next!
royalberry chapter 1 . 4/15/2003
Wow! That was really good. I loved that tale. I think I already kow what is going to happent though but who knows. This fairytale seems sto be one that will be filled with surprises. You also give great details. I love it.
Cremated Hamburgers chapter 1 . 4/12/2003
Oh!Cool!This story sounds great so far!Hurry up and write more !I love your story!:)
Atarikono chapter 1 . 4/7/2003
That was really good! It has a fun bouncy sort of mood, and the idea isn't overused either. Can't wait for Ch. 2!