Reviews for
Safety Canary chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
A nice piece. I actually wasn't expecting that.
Alyse Kettle chapter 1 . 9/6/2004
I liked this a lot - it flowed well, the style is great and you stick to it.
Looks like I'll be back to see what else you've written ...
(although ... did I miss something? what's the two-&-a-half? confused ...)
kep chapter 1 . 6/14/2003
wow, that's possibly the best piece i've read on this site. it was short and surprising, i like the slightly cryptic ending. very well written. just great.
Arayuldawen chapter 1 . 5/31/2003
This is really good. You have to continue with this _

Whisper to the Water chapter 1 . 4/11/2003
Admittedly normal, but still thought-provokingly Tim styled. Your endings remind me of Philip K. Dick's in the respect that I have to read them several times in order to "get" them.
Anumati chapter 1 . 4/9/2003
Well, it's certainly one of the best cop pieces I've ever seen (but given the state of that genre... not saying very much). I can see the art in it, and I like the rookie. The language flow is sweetly spicy and perfect. This has little pieces of human in it, but (at least for me) it also has a flavor of bravado that does not suit such a short piece.

Damned if I knew what his last line meant! It's very intriguing...