Reviews for Arthur Lee
Paradoxical Goddess chapter 1 . 4/8/2003
every time i read the word "orange" in your poems i have to smile.

love the guyfawkes night btw
the Queen of Jupiter chapter 1 . 4/8/2003
"and the language

like the crack

of a summer

rifle

lit the guyfawkes night,

away from

home, burning

the

words all the

same."

Oh my Lord, that was absolutely beautiful. It was beautiful. Wah...it's beautiful! *incoherentness*

Bah. It's beautiful. The word choice, the imagery, your descriptions, wah!

Keep writing! Peace
E. Gao chapter 1 . 4/7/2003
'who made words

glow like luminescent fox-moss, lupine

in the empty fields.'

- this is you, you know

'the way spectacled men would stare at later

on, under the heavy lights

of hindsight.'

- this is us all

'and the letters were the same “oh arthur,

are you not home?'

and

'the

disparaged

happy tone'

- how oddly nostalgic, how saddening...and yet...how true

'the language

like the crack

of a summer

rifle'

- oh...

oh. this is perfect.

was arthur a words kind of guy? [faints] (was he pretty?) he certainly sounds charasmatic. the kind of guy I would like. _;;

EG