Reviews for The Cursed Dancer
MuffinQueen chapter 1 . 5/8/2005
Very haunting! I really, really like it. I drew a picture like this once...but different. So never mind.I love your poetry. *sigh* And there's so much to read!
Frenzied-Thespian chapter 1 . 8/1/2004
I liked it you did a great job of ryhming (sp?).
starsknight chapter 1 . 8/11/2003
Wow. The rhythm of the poem was definitely irregular, but the words create this hauting feeling-whether it is despite or because of the irregularity, I cannot say, not being much of a poet myself. I really liked it, though. Haunting is the best word I can think of to describe it. It's very few words, and yet you manage to paint this amazing mental picture-for me, anyway. I love the line "laced with hate yet beautiful as a dove." The whole thing reminds me of old Irish woods and ancient times. A couple times the word order is a little awkward to read, even for poetic language: "that from the woods approaches her love" sounds a little stilted. Oh, and in the last line, is it curse-bound, or did you intend to keep it as two seperate words? In any case, I love the poem. Great job!
NuttyGummy chapter 1 . 6/16/2003
Wonderful. Simply wonderful! It was great. :)
Lady Rheia chapter 1 . 4/24/2003
very haunting. I like the last 4 lines a lot.
KiSSmeImALice chapter 1 . 4/23/2003
love it!