|Reviews for To Save a Kingdom|
| avid reader chapter 24 . 10/14/2007
I have to admit, I was unsatisfied with the outcome of Gadel. He was supposed to have turned into some black hearted creature, but I didn't really see that transformation at all.
He was a person who fell in love- who had that love leave him after countless secrets. He dealt with it the only way he knew how- by throwing himself into what the country expected of him. His "darkness" manifested directly because of Drianna, so it's stupid for her to think the "why did you change and what have you turned into blah" she was spouting. Basically, she just took him and dropped him- all while playing naive. Gadel was never even that cruel as a "black hearted person" - he still just seemed like a guy who had been betrayed. I found Driana losing her likability.. her naivety made me cringe.
Other than that, I really liked this story :D I love these classic kind of tales, really eats away at my time too.
| littlewitchgirl77 chapter 18 . 10/5/2007
really good want to read more
| vallerine chapter 24 . 9/17/2007
awesome story! loved your writing style!
| anybody chapter 24 . 9/15/2007
i loved it
| KelseyBell910 chapter 24 . 9/9/2007
lovely! fantastic! u are a wonderful writer! ]
| sUmM3R43terNIt33 chapter 24 . 7/13/2007
i absolutely love ur story. i wish there was more bout dri and shane in the end tho
| Evenstar1389 chapter 24 . 6/22/2007
Hihi i like this story a lot, it's a short but sweet fantasy story, a little short in depth compared to the usual trilogies but then u probably know that XD
I like Shane a lot but its kinda sad that Gadel went mad (
| silliegurl789 chapter 23 . 6/20/2007
yay! great job.
| Riku E. Fallon chapter 24 . 6/18/2007
Sad to say that after he grew up I never warmed up to Shane's character again. Ah well, it was still a pretty good story, thanks for posting your writing. I look forward to reading more of your works.
| hopelessromantic444 chapter 24 . 5/16/2007
wow. amazing story! incredible!
| tearsofthefallen chapter 24 . 5/5/2007
i have now read and reread this story five times. that is saying a lot, i only read most storys once. To Save a Kingdom is really good!
| Genato chapter 24 . 4/30/2007
AW.. i really liked it. i feel bad for gadel though. even though i knew fro the start that shane and drianna were right for each other.. although i had my doubts about gadel.
| Rei chapter 9 . 4/15/2007
ah! I am so happy that she is not staying with Gadel... he is too mean while drunk.
| Rei chapter 6 . 4/15/2007
Oh, very nice! I denfinately can't wait to read more :O)
| JusticeWriter chapter 24 . 2/8/2007
Awesome story. Simply, awesome. :)