That is so wonderful! I love Drianna and Shane. Even Gadel is cool. Good work! PLease write more.

WOW! This story was awesome! I didn't want to stop reading it! Your characters were VERY well thought out and the plot was EXCELLENT! It just seemed to me, however, that you didn't really explain "the power" that well. But still... Awesome story! I loved it! Keep writing!

"I wish him peace."

Best ending... EVER!

I am still very much enjoying your story. I love your style of writing so much. I hate stories that have too much description and I hate stories that have too little. Yours seems to have just the right amount to explain what's happening around without going on. The reason why I stopped this chapter was because I noticed a paragraph when you switched to the third person talking about Drianna. You could have ment it to be that way but it doesn't seem to fit.

"It’d been the day the two armies had set off for battle from the northern fortress. That morning she’d awoken and reached across her bed for the familiar body but found only her bedclothes. They were still warm to the touch and she groggily raised up on her elbows and opened her eyes. Shane was perched on the edge of the bed, pulling on his boots."

~Rachael

I've just started your story and I wish I didn't have to head off to school right now because I know I would be glued to my computer reading this. This is such a great story and very gripping. I can't wait to read more and I promise I will review again.

~Rachael

OH MY GAWD!

That is so sad... poor poor poor Gadel even though i was rutin 4 Shane thass still sad. I mean its bad enough he lost his mom and dad but then this... sobs... Driannas a bit sad aint she though i mean lovin 2 guys and leadin um on like that. Dont take this personally or anythin im just rambling i know! but that was still sad but realistic hey life is sad after all! anywayz very gud story!

Loved it!

point a) This is an amazing story. completely amazing. I stayed up all night long and read it. It actually altered my sleeping habits. Now I am all crusty and puffy and tired, but i dont care. It was worth it.

point b) YES YES YES YES, Shane won! Shane got the girl! yes. I hate whats-his-butt. I just hate him. arg! He was so... annoying. Just commanding. like "Come here, wench." arg! THANKYOU THANKYOU THANKYOU for letting SHane get Dri.

point c) Alright. I finished reading this story. Ya! Then i went and tried to read more stories... but there are no mroe stories! AH! How can there be no more stories? not even a few poems? Nada. This is it! No... It cant be. And you were talking aobut working on other stories and stuff, but are there any more? no! I want to read a Pirates of the Carrabean Fic! Now! I want more! please! Its like telling someone I'll take you shopping for new school clothes and then buying them only a sock. Don't get me wrong, this story is great. I loved it but where are the others! publish more now, please!

point d) I loved the ending- how you tied everything up in the epiloug. It made me feel all warm and fuzzy.

point e) I thought the Power were amazing. It was a great addition to this story. Its all mysterious and cool like. o...

point f) GET TYPING! I WANT MORE STORIES SOON... please?

Thanks for listening to my ranting!

Langsiell

WOW! Just WOW! AMAZING STORY! I absolutly love it! I really hope that you write more chapters! But i have to say this is one of the best stories I have ever read on fanfiction!

I liked the story but all the I (I this I that)annoyed the hell out of me.

Now I see why you have so many great is an excelent story you have here.

I can't see why you are not published.

such a beautiful fic

write more

yay, i read all of this today, and i luv it...yeah! thanx!

Nice! Was rootin 4 Shane and Dri all along. Good work!

Yeah! Go magical healing kisses!