Oh hell yeah! I'm having a lot of fun! Their love is really sweet, but I wonder if it will survive when Harvana comes back as a Queen. Will she come back? Gadel seemed teetering on the verge of a blackhole, and now with his love leaving...I hope he doesn't do anything stupid.

Nealp really reminds me of Caliban from "The Tempest" by Shakespeare. Same simpleton values. Same obsession with a pretty girl. And I think at one point, he tries to rape her too! Though I think her dad saved her, not her bf like here :) Enjoying it immensely. Shane's in the picture too- I wonder what next.

:)

This story has been on here 9 years, but I don't ever remember reading it. Well, I'm in the mood for good literature, and it's really nice to read some, instead of writing some ;)

Absolutely wonderful storyline! Iread the whole thing from start to finish in one day because it was so well written. Well done!

And now I'll proceed to go into withdrawal from finishing this story. A great read.

Aaaaw yaaaay!

Eep! I'm genuinely scared to read more, I want it to stop right here! But I haven't been able to resist chapter after chapter so far, so I doubt I'll have much luck. Please be a happy ending please be a happy ending...

It's true. I wanted the smoochies. Oh how I wanted them! It is insane to me to be reading this 9 years after you wrote it. I hope you still find this!

What an absolutely lovely story! :)

Ri

hahaha you're such a sadistic writer. it's almost as if you're HAPPILY proclaiming the sadness in your author's note! xD not sure if To Save A Kingdom is the title you want changed since this was written eons ago. but i think it's an okay title. maybe not completely apt, but i cant think of anything else.

wow. intense chapter.

This the second time ive read this story since 3 years ago... And I find it awesome again xD It's sweet and the story flows~ I never tire of fantasy romances

Wow.

Your plottting for this wholle story was amaazing.

I could feel the solid structure,and there was none of that

Faffing about some writers haave,the plot was straight forward and Fast moving.

Oh and thumbss up for your authors notes theey kept me amused through out the story. :)

Good luck with future stories.

Byexbye

this truely was a lovely story. I'm so glad that Shane was the guy, you really changed my heart there because I only thought of Shane as a Friend of Drianna's as well until he said the whole 'Love' sentiment. Then I began to look back and see what I'd not seen. You should become a writer and write more stories. I loved how you tied Power into all of this, because seriously, unless you try to make it weird and creepy, Magic is pretty darn awesome! :)

ok ok, I'll admit it. I did want the smoochies! :D rofl