Reviews for To Save a Kingdom
Anon E. Mouse chapter 7 . 4/18/2003
I must admit, this is an enchanting story. I do hope you will add more to it soon, though I see you already update often. :-) Charming story.
The Searcher chapter 7 . 4/18/2003
I LOVE IT! Write more soon please!
LPScissorhands chapter 7 . 4/18/2003
this is great! keep writing, i look forward to reading more, i plan on looking to see if yuv written more at least once a day. that's how much i enjoy it :)
LiNdSaY.AP chapter 6 . 4/17/2003
very very good! I adore your style of writing. It's awesome. Your plot kicks some serious butt and I can't wait to hear more! Contact me to let me know when ther's more!
Estelle Stafford chapter 6 . 4/17/2003
I love it, I can't wait to see what is next. Update soon please. Please. Please. Please.
Estelle Stafford chapter 5 . 4/17/2003
I see some sparks are flying.
Estelle Stafford chapter 4 . 4/17/2003
Oh my, I feel sorry for her. Will she ever see Shane again?
S. Breland chapter 5 . 4/16/2003
Oh wow...

That's really good.

I'm bad at writing in first person. I try, but I have little skill for it, unless it's a narrative or parody on my life. Or something like that.

Seriously, I think that Havara (lol, forgot her real name already...) should marry someone from insert name of country at war here and sort of forge a new alliance or something? I dunno, I'm just musing. Ignore me. :-D

You're a fantastic writer!

Pix
vintagepostcard chapter 5 . 4/16/2003
I love the plot! This is awesome!
Weathered chapter 5 . 4/16/2003
Still good! Update soon
Ms Urania chapter 4 . 4/15/2003
I like this so far. It flows well and I'm interested in what will happen to Havara next. However, you have a few spelling mistakes which distract from the story. Besides that good work!
Sweetvenom1 chapter 4 . 4/15/2003
I love this story and I hope that you will update it soon. Havara is a good character, but she seems too neutral about her enslavement. she doesn't really struggle but she doesn't really accept it. but other than that everything is great.
Weathered chapter 3 . 4/10/2003
Yay, you updated! *grin* I like your writing style, good description, and your characters are believable. Update soon!
shapeshifterchik13 chapter 3 . 4/9/2003
This is such a good story! You have to up date soon, I can't believe how fast I got hooked on it!
Weathered chapter 2 . 4/7/2003
This is good! Update soon I wanna know what happens. This is a very interesting start.
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