Oh G... I'm moaning right now and snorting because she didn't end up with Gadel. I have to say though that I didn't really liked the way how your POV sounded. It seemed to me that she was narrating it (maybe she's supposed to) and that I don't like those styles. I was thankful that it was short but was deeply distraught because it's short. I have to say though that I was drawn to your story because of the plot, I was waiting to see who'd end up with who but that I find that your style in writing is not sufficient enough... I don't know what word to use. So yeah, I'm sorry if I hurt your feelings but I do hope that I could've been some use.

Wow, I can't beleive that you finished it! This is definatly in my top three storys of all time from this site. I hope you keep writting and gracing this site with you amazing fics. I hope that you are sucsesful in whatever you do, even if you don't publish this like I sujested. And as I said earlyer, please exuse any spelling mistakes in my reviews. I'm completely and uterly hopeless!

ah... sorry, had to get that out. Their getting mairried? Took them long enough!

YES! Skrew Gadel, I'm team Shane! It's really funny, too. I was listening to I'm in love with you right when they started to get to the smoochies!

I would love to see parts of versions 1 and 1.5. After reading this version, they seem kind of comical!

wow...wow...wow...

I WANTED THE SMOOCHIES! WHY! That had to be the funniest chapter you've ever written. Plese do more like it. I know they all can't be fluff, but who cares!

I wish I could wear cloths like that. You are very good at getting across what every thing looks like. I still wish that I could picture people better, but everthing else I have no problem with. With your writting, it's like watching a movie screen!

EK! Shane was all grr grr at the end there. I wonder who he's in love with. I have revised my opinion on Shane and Gadel. I think that Gadel was wonderful when they were at the manor, but if he is going to become a drunk or try to destroy the kingdom, I don't like him. On the other hand, if he comes running after her with love in his heart and his kingdoms secrets on his lips, he's all good. Shane I think is very hot tempered, but good. I also think that her leaving afected him deaply and that she might even be the one he's in love with. I don't know how I would feal if they did get together yet, but my mind is open to the posibility. Tell me if any of my drabble is right. I'm trying to be all understanding of the "story within the story"... blame it on my reading teacher.

This stinks. I hope that Gadel chases after her. They are so perfect for each other. I also don't want her to fall in love with Shane. I don't really like him as much as I did when he was a kid. Gr, this fic is making me emotional.

Yes, he is a "hottie" as you but it. I'm liking this story more and more! iT WOULD BE REALLY NICE IF YOU COULD UP A PICTURE OF HIS HOTNESS SO i COULD SEE WHAT HE REALLY LOOKS LIKE. uNFORTUNATLEY, i'M NOT VERY GOOD A PICTURING WHAT PEOPLE LOOK LIKE. Oh darn, aparently I axidently pushed the caps lock butten. Whatever, I'm too lazy to rewrite this!

You come up with all of theese cool names. What is your insperation? Also, the way you have the characters talk, it's like a flawless blend of modern and midevil. I don't know why you said this wasn't that good on your profile. I think you underestimate you writing skills. You are much better than a lot of the people on this site!

Wow, I can't imagine what that must have been like, having your entire world changed so unexpectedly twice. Anyways, I think you should publish this, I think it would do pretty well. You would have to leghten it up a bit and get it profetionaly edited, but I really think you could do it. Also, I think I'm going to review every other chapter or so. The chapters aren't long enough for me to review every one

(that's like every 5-10 min.!)

Aw, that was so sad. She's such a sweet girl. It sounds like Shane has a crush on her. Will you be doing anything with them?

I'm really exited to read this! I've been spending all my time lately on fanfiction, and this is the first fic from fictionpress that I've read in a while. The begining is very well written, and know I'm all exited. It's like dun, dun, duun! I'll try to remember to review each chapter, but no promises. If there are any cliffies, I most likely will have to read the next chapter fist. Also, if I ever make any spelling mistakes in any of my reviews, please forgive me! I'm hopeless!