Reviews for It's Over
Jaganshi1019 chapter 1 . 7/23/2006
i have been in a relationship like this... i'm in one now! lol. how ironic... great poem. .
Sapphire Spectrum chapter 1 . 11/21/2005
oh, that was really sad. I've become your greatest fan - you're truly inspirational at writing though, it's hard not to. keep it up!
Rocky G chapter 1 . 1/5/2005
Wow great poem! Really brings out how confusing love can be, and how after a while in a relationship we fear being alone again.
Ruby Woo chapter 1 . 1/4/2005
Yes, I relate to this very well indeed.
loz chapter 1 . 6/17/2004
The structure of this poem shows real class. The way a reader absorbs it is controlled by you. As they read the first line and then the second their feelings towards the character changes. This is quite vague...in a good way..so many readers can relate to the subject.I'm luvin it luvin it luvin it. Laura aka loz.x
Lori Brennan chapter 1 . 4/1/2004
My favorite part of the poem would have to be the beginning, "Standing alone with you at my side." A startling contradiction.
lamepunknbored chapter 1 . 8/22/2003
I really like this! I feel like it all the time.. I know horrible.. Good job, off to read more.
Lady B.V Rose chapter 1 . 8/21/2003
Girl you're SO on my fave authors! I know exactly what you mean here! *mutters damn b/fs*

Lady B.
Cherub of the Gutter chapter 1 . 5/2/2003
This is good! It reminds me of a Simon & Garfunkel song called "Overs". You should listen to it, it's very insightful.
ChaoxAngel chapter 1 . 4/8/2003
This one's very nice... Great. Keep writing. :o)

DW
Miamouse chapter 1 . 4/8/2003
i like this, the rhyming doesn't seem forced

Mia :)
E. Hisifithith chapter 1 . 4/8/2003
yup! I can totally relate! i love the rhyme, it adds to the flow, yet it doesn't take away from the meaning, which is good. This is really good. you've got talent! great job and keep up the great work!