Reviews for McHell
random chapter 1 . 2/19/2006
he he he. sound like my mom. very funny!
Shadowed Ilusions chapter 1 . 1/2/2006
Lol this story is funny. I like the way you protray the child. It was very funny and i liked the way wrote this story with description etc. I also like the way you wrote the characters reaction to things in between writing in speech.
FabledArc chapter 1 . 10/9/2005
This was funny and I know how it feels to be in a noisy place when all you want to do is : I think we all know that this fic has had an effect on me. I wanted to leave here, thinking that I'd never find a decent story and that my fics wouldn't thrive here. I gave it (this site) one last shot after reading fanfiction and wanting something more. Something original. Lo and behold I happened to find "McHell" in the spotlight. I was more of an adventure type but I read it anyway. Long story short, I found that venturing out of my prefered genre wasn't so bad. Thank you for restoring my faith and will to post up my own stories and I really hope to find pieces just as good around fictionpress.~TwilightWatcher
kitedragon chapter 1 . 8/17/2005
It's not common to see such skilled writing. The words blend really well together. Also, I sort of find the last part about revealing his emotions quite interesting.
Liberty 5-3000 chapter 1 . 7/7/2005
this is halarious! You really captured the way a child acts. Well done!
Tapioooca chapter 1 . 5/30/2005
i loved the "By the way...stop breeding" line. nice story!
TwystedFate chapter 1 . 4/18/2005
I think I am in love with Donovan. He looks like he would get along nicely with my Damien. I love.
Mary Spring chapter 1 . 4/6/2005
hahaha! that was funny... and i thought he was the guy behind the counter or something..hahaha...it was really funny..you made me laugh out loud...
Anime Girl006 chapter 1 . 3/26/2005
Hello. That was funny. Love it a lot bye.
gangster-dolly chapter 1 . 2/5/2005
Haham so funny yet so true.

-gangster-dolly
Meliai chapter 1 . 1/2/2005
Aw, super cute! And very funny! I loved that little girl, and especially Donovan when he told off that father. o Awesome!
amarelle chapter 1 . 11/10/2004
"And by the way...stop breeding." Aww, that was adorable. I really like your character Donovan. I definitely go read more of your stories!
Leolain chapter 1 . 7/19/2004
That was so funny! I had to laugh, but it's 5 in the morning, so my face is very red and I'm snorting... _
Chan Yoruyamatiha chapter 1 . 6/21/2004
Simply hilarious. I felt so sorry for that man, hehe. Some people have all the patience I suppose.
PurestPassion chapter 1 . 5/31/2004
I Love irony! The best type of humour there is. This short story maintains interest throughout (which is a very good thing, believe me) and i liked how the comedy developed right up until that last punch line. A Great read
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