Reviews for Bitter Blood
Akai-MS chapter 1 . 8/11/2005
This story was amazing! I mean the only complaints I have is that I wish it were longer! It wasn't too fast, the grammer was perfect, and's just an incredible story with an incredible plot! I'm terrible at criticisim so I'm sorry if I'm not much help.

Also, if you have the time and when I actually get it uploaded. Could you read my vampire story that I have created? I should get it uploaded in a few days or so.

Overall: AWESOME JOB~!
Jenniexb chapter 1 . 4/15/2005
Excellent story, thank you for sharing.
jade chapter 1 . 1/23/2005
wow! i luv the ending tho i did wish it was longer
Nighttime Wanderer chapter 1 . 5/10/2004
I like it, pelase read my story It Will SUrely Come To Pass ((it is about vampires))
Slate Green chapter 1 . 11/19/2003
What a wonderful tale! I read it without stopping-twice. **vigorous applause* The characters were great, and the Egyptian twists wasn't too out of place.
Willum chapter 1 . 12/4/2000
Another good story that seems to just miss the mark. I found the characters intriguing, and some of the plot pretty cool, but it seemed like too much was packed into the story. If it had been a series of stories, with the big part of Seripis playing out over them, I think it would have been better. Nice twist on the vampire mythos, but what weaknesses did it leave them with? Other than being challenged by an older vampire, would someone else been a threat to them? Okay, I'm done ranting, but overall...I liked it.
HoukanGishi chapter 1 . 12/3/2000
That was really really good! I loved the story line and the usage of the myth. It was great!