Reviews for Right Kind of Wrong |
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![]() ![]() ![]() plz plz plz plz plz plz plz keep wrting this story im like dyin her keep goin i really want 2 know wat happens next |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh that is so cute and so adorable , i dont know how to explain it! ahh , i cna twait for more , its agreta story , im bigger on the supernatural stuff but it was really cute and alittle awkward but thats what made it so great. i cnt wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I cant begin to tell you how cute this story was. I got all emotional during different parts of the story when Paul expressed he didnt just want sex. *sigh* If only there were more people out there like that. Excellent story by the way. I loved it! sunflowersing |
![]() ![]() ![]() I cannot believe her parents kicked her out. It seems to me that her living with her boyfriend because her parents kicked her out is worse for their image than anything before. Anyway, I enjoy this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That is so sweet the last thing he said and your story is very good lol XBethX |
![]() ![]() ![]() Umm...good story! I have a few suggestions if you would like to hear me out. It has a lot of potential, it's just that everything seems very awkward and this Lindsey seems to care a lot about what people think of her...she's kind of loserly. But, well, if that was the kind of vibe you wanted to give off, then that's fine. Just don't overdo it because it seems like very unnatural and uncomfortable interactions going on there. Good story though! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i hope up together together awsome story i wish u luck on your writing |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm not sure if it's over, but your story was super cute. I loved it! |
![]() ![]() such a cute story :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() love this sotry.. are u going to update.. cause its been almost 2 years |
![]() ![]() ![]() i really like your story and i can't wait to find out what happens. -Kate |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh update! : that was great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw he's soo sweet |
![]() ![]() ![]() hm well wat is thr to but hm well coolie ficy i do wish u update soon but this ficy is strange but a kind of strge that u keep wanting to read so UPDATE PLZ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ok you must write more, I mean its been almost 6 months since I last checked up on the story...Please write more |