Reviews for abortion
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 11/30/2004
Using a butterfly and a cacoon to desribe abortion was brillant. Deep and held a message. Great job ! -

Noelle
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 11/28/2004
Nice poem. My answer to your question—

Ecclesiastes 3:1 to 3:8.

"To every thing there is a season, and a time to every purpose under heaven" m
Lori Brennan chapter 1 . 4/1/2004
Life is precious, I am against abortions but for personal choice. I have no place to tell others what to do. I also believe if the biological father is willing to care for the child, he should have a say in weather or not the baby is aborted. It is half of him, the woman can give her rights up if she wants nothing to do with the child.
Infinite Smiles chapter 1 . 3/23/2004
Great imagery. So sad.
CaramelCream chapter 1 . 1/16/2004
I agree fully. I hate abortion. I hate the concept. People who get aboprtions are cowards! Abortion is another word for legal murder. What makes it different from a killing someone who is already born?
*CaramelCream*
Lina Inverse chapter 1 . 12/8/2003
Very beautiful. Even though I disagree with the message, I can't help but fall in love with the poem.
Harriet I. Jefferson chapter 1 . 10/22/2003
that rocks! Please R&R my work!
Gram chapter 1 . 9/17/2003
tres beautiful.

SUCCINCT!

you've topped yourself-

(i'd like it on a t-shirt!)

were you thiking of Maggie?-she'd be your muse for this one!
mmoonsshiner chapter 1 . 9/11/2003
..its amazing how u could say so much in 14 words. abortion is a heavy subject one whos dicision should only be between mother and child, myself iam prolife but what if the life being offered isnt worth the pain?

Nat
Gethsemene chapter 1 . 5/22/2003
hey i got ur review... u obviously ain't a christian... well u'd have to be a christian to understand my story... i'm only 15 too so i don't know much about China or nething... I just had them speaking like that to show they are chinese... I read a book called Jesus Freaks and it's all about ppl being martyred... most of the stories were of young ppl being martyred in china... this story wasn't set in the modern days like now it was like in the future when the world gets worse and no1 knows what the world'll be like unless u beleive in the rapture and i do... I believe that everybody who loves Christ will be persecuted in some way but we will live with Him in heaven... sorry this isn't a flame in ne way but i just thought i'd tell u my view... ur poem's very good short and sweet but it sorta hurt me coz sum1 i'm very dear to had an abortion and i just don't think that it matters nemore coz she's been 4givn for it by God... coz she's now a christian... i duno just thought i'd say that.. bye
Gemtog4319 chapter 1 . 5/13/2003
WAY TOO LONG! I'm bored to death!I actually didn't die, aren't you relieved?It really means a lot to know you care for me and my sister Queech Quon. Just one more thing ...make a wish and scroll down.

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YOUR WISH WON'T COME TRUE BECAUSE YOU FELL FOR IT. I MEAN C'MON MY NAME ISN'T "MAGICtog4319" ITS "gemtog4319" YOU LOSER. JUST KIDDING,BUT TO SUM IT UP IT SUCKED LOL!AHZAH!
Cherub of the Gutter chapter 1 . 5/2/2003
Interesting... I share the opinion of Kattan Fan. Abortion should be available to rape victims, and also in situations where giving birth to the child could kill the mother.
Psycho-kyugurl chapter 1 . 4/9/2003
It's amazing how writers could express their belief and ideas in only three lines. I like it.
ChaoxAngel chapter 1 . 4/8/2003
There is only one sentence about abortion that I know: "Abortion is a decision of paramount difficulty to make, and conclusions shall never be arrived at lightly."

Views aside. I like the way you used a butterfly in a cocoon to descrbibe the life that is being destroyed in an abortion. Very nice. Keep up the good writing. :o)

DW
E. Hisifithith chapter 1 . 4/8/2003
Hmm... good. Says alot on just three little lines! great job!

my opinions, huh? ok. yeah, it's unfair for the aborted child cause it never gets a chance to live but sometimes, it's for the best. If the mother was just careless, then abortion shouldn't be an option to them. But to Victims of rape who wind up pregnant should have abortion open to them, since they couldn't help that they were made pregnant. So yeah... that's my opp!

but yeah. this is an awesome poem! keep up the great work!
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