OMG! I missed this story so much! I'm so glad that you finally updated. I have had a hard time with my originals too. I have stopped and started many new projects, but as usual, that doens't always help. I am fascinated by the way you could continue this with the same zest you possessed in the first chapters. I hope I dont have to wait another 4 months for the next chapter. Please don't make us wait that long. Love this story! ~ Nev

Oh my god! Jamie! Damn you and those freaking cliffhangers! Rawr! Haha! Axcelia is finally coming in.. Muahaha. I need to get to work on her story though and how she was created and such. Damnit.. Anyway.. KICK ASS.

Hm...I wish I had come to read this sooner...It's very well written, but you need to take a seperate line when someone else is talking...
Devin is such an awesome name!
And I really like your story...It's incredibly well written...
I will read the rest later, after I come back from school!

O! I LOVE it!
I don't know if you're into Vampire stories or just wanted to write one, but if you read them, read The Vampire Diaries by L. J. Smith.
I can't read anymore today. I have school to get going to.
*Witch Goddess*

Eh... cheerleaders! BLECH! Sorry. I know I'm stereotyping cheerleaders. Poor Devin.
I'm already in love with Donovan. :) He's mysterious and... creepy. Keep it up!
*Witch Goddess*

Hello! I read the first chapter. I really like it. You use the name Riley! I love that name and usually use it in my stories as well (usually as a girls name and a first name).
Anywho... keep up the good work and if you ever want to talk about writing IM me or email me at
*Witch Goddess*
-On to the next chapter!

This is great...Update soon

the chapters awesome. and it wasnt too bad a cliffie. hopefully they will be alright.. the story is wonderfuul. i put the wrong empphassis on the wrong siilablle. yeah. i get slap happy. update soon!

Wow, nice cliffie. Ah, well at least Donovan's alright... for now.

Great story. Keep writing and update soon!

Peachez _~

Jamie! Hehe. I got myself an account on here. I've already uploaded a few things. But I just wanted to tell you that this story is very good and to be honest, you were the one to actually made me want to start writing. D I love ya Jamie. And everyone watch out for Axcelia! Muahahaha! lol

Worth the wait but a nasty cliffie! Even if I do say so myself. lol, then again you seem to be good at those and I can't complain. I do it too. -

So she still hasn't found Donovan? Hm... that can't be good. Well keep writing and update soon!

Peachez _~

you updated! the chapter is good but. confusing. when devin is going down the stairs there is lots of description but it isnt clear what has happened. its like missing a big pieces so you can only get the vague edges from it. and dar was her brother? how does that work out? well, update soon. if you want to talk about your story just im me _

Wow! That is amazing! It is so real and yet so surreal... I am like totally caught under your spell. I don't know how to tell you to improve, it's that good. One of the best things I have ever read, including published works.

good story! write more!

HUH! I thought I reviewed this. *scratches back of head* Yeah, I guess I don't really pay attention, do I? Sorry. I still love this. The whole concept is interesting. ... So she's trapped and some weird people are calling her name. Dun, dun dun... Sorry, had to do that. Her brother? So was he turned into a vampire? That would explain why she hadn't seen him, and the fact that he lived so far. What about Donovan? I should really stop asking people questions... Well, keep writing and update soon!

Peachez _~