Reviews for the blind man
Rocky G chapter 1 . 1/5/2005
Wow makes you wonder what life would be like for the blind. Without sight does the world still hold beauty.
Lori Brennan chapter 1 . 4/1/2004
Sight is relative, if the man has never had vision, then he isn't blind.
ittybittytreefrog chapter 1 . 7/24/2003
Interesting. In the absence of vision create your own world. Nice poem.
PDX Bard chapter 1 . 4/14/2003
very nice pattern and imagery, or lack thereof

like the way you think within the ink!
Princess Mulan chapter 1 . 4/11/2003
This is a lovely Tanka!

I love how you used sun and stars as the thing that can't be seen.

I can't imagine living in dark world, so lonely.

this is a lovely Haiku!
Needa S chapter 1 . 4/9/2003
Awesome! Keep writing..
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 4/9/2003
I liked it.

Heart of the Sword
ChaoxAngel chapter 1 . 4/8/2003
A tanka? *hmm* I don't know about it, it's surely okay for me. :o) You've written a nice piece here... I like it -I'd have to say that I wouldn't know what a blind man sees.

DW