Reviews for Tainted, Yet Pure
iamthedave chapter 1 . 9/29/2006
Excellent.

This story flows at a good pace, has lots of nice description and wordplay, no mistakes I could spot barring some slightly confusing structure (you should have either indented or double line spaced, basically), and a very interesting, mature basis.

Yeah. All good.

Return reviews appreciated.
Phantom Angel chapter 1 . 4/3/2005
You have a very very good style. One of the best I've read since I joined. I LOVE IT!
Tessabe chapter 1 . 1/30/2005
This is very good, The only problem I had with it was that the paragraphs were too long, it made it a little hard too read here, other than that I loved it.
Clayton B chapter 1 . 6/23/2004
This sort of thing is not my thing, but good none the less. I like the angsty-ness
Jez-Arinn chapter 1 . 1/10/2004
i must say, i really like the language you used. it's so... good. you have a very good command in this language.
is mannon a guy? i usually wouldn't read this sort of work but, with your language skills, i just had to review your work.
Fragmental Dani chapter 1 . 4/9/2003
More is coming, I hope? Lovely start, and I love the explanation of the title.
Weirdlet chapter 1 . 4/9/2003
Wow. Yes, I think that counts as sensual, even if it doesn't result in a full act- it certainly evokes feeling.