Reviews for Iron Hand |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wow... I was blushing for them getting caught on the couch I think it's a little too soon for them though From a tramatized person POV but then it wouldn't be fictional now would it I like it enough to keep reading, wanting more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely amazing i love it so creative and heart breaking i hope there is a sequel |
![]() ![]() ![]() evil evil evil person yes write a sequel please please |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pure evil...and yes, I know its angst but I still can't get over it...anyway its still going in my favourites. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That's an evil way to end a story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh my gosh! you did not! that is too mean! wah! i want to cry! i like the ending, but i need to know what happened! ah!thank you for the wonderful story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful, Mizu. You can't always have a happy ending. :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() That deserves a big "Aw!" **SCARS** |
![]() ![]() ![]() yay! Read 1st chapter. iv'e dreamt of this scenario before. It's incredibly creepy that you would write about it. . You are incredibly talented with dialogue. Your characters are so real. Superbly fleshy. Alright moving on to ch.2! **SCARS** |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay sorry but I'm really sleepy and when you said "adrenaline induced pants" I thought you meant some type of super pants. Yeah whatever I need sleep, well the story is still going good. I'll probably be done by tommorow. I just realised this is the most boring review I've ever given. Sorry bout that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well that was definetly a solid and well written start to what I hope is a good story. Spelling and grammar seems to be quite good. But just one question, how can Jett afford such a lavish lifestyle if he's only in college? |
![]() ![]() I hate you. That is a horrible way to end this story. I am fucking sobbing and I...god damn! You had to end it like that? My boyfriend is comming over in a half hour and my mascara is running, and my eyes are red and puffy, he'll think that someone has died. Good god...make a second one, you have to |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful story. It's a sad ending but it fits well with the story. Anyone who thinks otherwise should get over it, this is angst you know. Please continue with your sequel, I was half way through reading it when I realized I should review this one first. "If you win getting through the Shoikon Grove, I will give you a toad flavored lollipop, so you can lick the toad, without actually licking the toad!" |
![]() ![]() oh my god that was so sad it actually had me in tears even though its fiction. this has to be officially my fav story right now |