Reviews for Til You Learn |
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![]() ![]() ![]() That was kind of funny! Right more soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Intresting story keep it up |
![]() ![]() Will you please write more? What happens to her? Who is the God that stays by her side? |
![]() ![]() ![]() thanks for updating you story I can't wait for your next installment ) |
![]() ![]() And you're the one talking about the sorrows of death. Your site is ultimately depressing... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Curiosity may have killed the cat, but satisfaction brought him back! BLAH |
![]() ![]() srry this is probably going to sound mean i don't mean it to be but is english your native language? if not, you could talk a little to your english teacher and get her to help you out cuz the main idea of this is good but i kept noticing things that didn't make any sense...if your passion is writing keep it up you have potential but...there is room for improvement |
![]() ![]() Sequel this up where the priest gets his * shot up before the sacrifice. What kind of religion is this again? |
![]() ![]() Hi! I had nothing to do so I thought I'd read this story! Like your writing style! Very interesting, wasn't boring at all. Keep up the good work! And oh, updated Twisted Fate already! Go check it out! fanfic/jen5/ |
![]() ![]() Hello. The granola barre says you are not weird, and she is. That's bloodless but don't tell her i told you that or she'll get mad. So, um, you're not as crazy and weird as her. Thankyou. Jayme |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh poor kay! i have bad dreams too but not like those. so what's going to happen? |
![]() ![]() ![]() doesnt make sense. try writing about a silver tigress it is ur screen name. also baby johns is a restraunt in my area, they have great pizza |
![]() ![]() ![]() OOh, creepy. Nice and intriguing. I love the "100% cotton pillowcase." Update soon! -Elaine Maybe you could check out my stuff? |
![]() ![]() It is the borinist story I ever read |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! that was realli good! keep up the work! hahahahha, jk, im weird, k? I review myself! P |