I love it! Please with more!

Good interpretation of Avril Lavigne's song.

My favorite part was, "I’m April. No, not the month, silly, that’s my name. I’m sixteen years old, with long red hair and blue eyes. I’m not that tall, but I’m tall enough, I suppose."

This was an okay story. i say okay, because it has the potential to become *really* good with a little revising...some of it is a little bit corny and overused, in order to give this story the something that it deserves, make it a bit different then most stories like this.

overall, I enjoyed it. Please don't take offense to my comments, my intention is not to condemn, but to critique so you will become a better writer. Kep writing!

Aww... so sweet. I should start carrying around a blanket in my backpack too. Just in case I meet some hopelessly depressed guy on a brige someday. ::looks around to see others snikering:: Hey! It could happen. wow... I'm going to go before I sound too much like an old Burger King commercial.

Very nice story. I liked it alot.