Yay, another chapter! And you changed her name! Cool! Anyway, I liked this chapter, but the whole headache thing was just because of the bad day, right? Or was she having a panic attack or a migraine? Hmm, then again, it could really just be a bad headache because of a bad day. Ok, I'll stop babbling now. Keep up the great work and update soon. I want to find out what happens next! :)

u've got something going here, it's pretty good, and i can totally relate to Annette. by the way, how u pronounce that? i thought i got it, but then i guess i don't. oh well, keep up the good work! -

its a really great story and what makes it ever better is how clueless annette is. it adds a lot to the story and makes it interesting. i'm also an aspiring writer and the best advice i can give you is to write the best you can and hope that people think it has a chance and that i do think is true. this definitely has a load of potential and i'm interested in seeing how annette/jonathan end up next chapter.

plz write more soon.

Much Love, Crazed

You're gonna explain that panic attack right? Cause I'm totally lost. She doesn't have like a terminal disease does she? That would be so sad. I really do like Jonathon though, he's so sweet. He's very funny though, and I like funny guys. Celia seems a little...pushy and a little too eager to snatch Annette's guy away. I don't think I like her very much. Anyway, good chapter. Nice description of the very scar panic pain-y attack. I'm glad you updated so quickly, do it again...please.

~Mel~

Ack. Headaches suck. But I'm glad Annette ran into Jonathan *grins*. I kinda saw that coming, but I wasn't sure. But anyways. Good story! I hope you continue.

Aww...poor Annette. *pat pat* She'll be okay. Hehe. I think you're a muchosly great writer, and I love the fact that you wrote in 3rd person. I think you know so much more from the point of view that is looking at 'the big picture'. Anyway, I'm gonna go and read the 2nd chapter now...lol...

Oh wow, you have to continue that. I love it! I'm totally eager for more. It was so sad, but I have to admit that I'm a little confused. So Jonathon likes Annette or Celia? Cause like... I thought he liked Annette, but then he completely ignored her and she left... but then he rememebred her later so, I don't know. I'm lost, but I really don't mind cause it was well written. Um... I'm jealous of your ability to write in third person. I think I have this weird restriction that I'm imposed on myself. Anyway...I don't know, I didn't actally get into it till the party section, but I think that was more my fault than yours. Anyway it was good. I really liked it and I hope you update soon.

~Mel~

I like it! There's nothing really to complain about, so I think you should update soon!

Alyssha

Aw geez. I feel bad for Sundae and I can totally relate to her. She's reminding me of my years in high school. Anyway, I do hope you update soon because I'd really like to see what happens next. This looks like it's going to be a great story! :)

Aw, poor ignorant Sundae. lol. update soon, this story is cool.