Reviews for If I only had one moment
Queen of the Harpies chapter 1 . 11/12/2003
Oh, how sad. I love your rhyme scheme. I myself write poetry that hardly ever rhymes, most of it is just straight up free form. I like your poetry. Should you write anymore, you should post them. I felt some strong passion coming from the first two stanzas. MM..stanzas. Favorite line: "Resentment filled my heart/and wrath filled my soul/but deep down I still knew/I loved without control" I can't wait to read more!
Unique-Poet chapter 1 . 7/21/2003
That was a beautiful poem, I think you should enter it
BaBeBgrL chapter 1 . 4/11/2003
I really enjoyed reading this poem, it captured the emotion of the moment very well and I wouldnt change much. I would however consider revising the line that reads "hollow and empty I am inside" it's sort of awkward and distracts a little from the flow of the poem. But, other than that I'd have to say: extremely well written.