Reviews for The World I'm In
Celestial Sailor chapter 1 . 7/9/2003
A nice poem, but requires a bit of work. (I'm not being nasty, I want to help you )

You need to define what your topic is; what it is that you are writing about. I was unsure about the poem topic and it's relation, but maybe it's only for you to understand. It's not my favourite of all your stories, but sure is a nice one. Good luck for the future and keep reading books which you enjoy )
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 5/24/2003
very true, such a beautiful poem, very much so
Tusaki Hibiki chapter 1 . 5/18/2003
hm...I like. *contenplates* Tis good! :) (:
BrittneyAnna chapter 1 . 5/10/2003
I like it. Its sad and yet sweet at the same time. ALso thanks for reviewing my poem.