can write.

Me, Faye? Hehehe, so . . . I dunno. Self absorbed I am/we all are. But... that's my name, Vicky! :D

Don't tell me you took it from someone else. I like my self-confidence... XD

~Vicky!

The complexity of your characters is so unique, even though the point of the story is personification of stereotypical states of being. I really wish you would continue with this story. It isn't often that I feel so strongly about something I read. It takes a true genius to create characters the reader can identify with so well.

Wow! This is awesome! You right with such knowledge and understanding of your story, keeping the reader in suspense even when your explaining the intricat details of the characters lives. WRITE MORE! (and thats an order)

Wow! This story is really unique - I can't recall reading anything like it before. I love the way you've written it, it just flows beautifully. I'll definately keep reading this. _

I like this story so far. I love how it's written, very descriptive and poetic. I'm really looking forward as to where this story goes.

Ellie

I'm really curious as to how this will turn out. So far it's good, and I'm sure it'll continue to be. And I have to admit that I thought the narrator was female when he described Wendy kissing him. Don't ask me why.