But they just got together! And you killed them off! That's just rude!

j/k I enjoyed reading every chapter very muchly.

~Luna

hi hi! Me again! Such a sweet poem!

~Luna

Ok, well, the third chapter was better than the second. But both were still really good.

~Luna

Ok.

~Luna

this is sad *sniffles*

Write more!

Amazing work here, brilliant, well done. Effin brilliant.

BTW, On your profile you mentioned a person flamed you, someone on your favourite's list, well, I just want to assure you it isn't me. I don't go on anymore. I read the flame, and it's obvious that his person is clearly braindead. I haven't read your story, basically because it's not my taste ( sorry ), I don't like FanFiction because I prefer to read people write their own characters. I hope this proves that I have not given you any bad reviews, even though I can't see how I proved it... I'm just mumbling, lol. Anyway, take no notice of the flamer. I don't think it was anyone from your favourites list because you wouldn't add someone who was like that, would you?

Anyway... lol. Excellent work.

I don't think I ever finished reading this, so now I am. This series was very, very good. It really captured the pain the protagonist suffered, despite its concise length. Great job.

Good job.

cuteness! and welcome back!

Oh no! they didn't die did they? "I've joing you in heaven"? they're just happy together again right?

anyway. loved it all! are you going to write any more for it? please? **looks hopefully**

Yay! *ahem*

they met, well, we knew they would, but still...

my favourite lines are:

"Tears stream down our faces,

Maybe we don’t think on such a different basis."

great work sal!

Aw! (

O loving this :D

basement vs. sky -brilliant take on it.

**rushes to click to next chapter**

That was SO good Sal! Keep it up! I think that was such an awesome poem! I lve it! Keep it up, Sal!

How do you rhyme so well? Oh well.. I forgot to review on the first part but who cares. I like the way you say 'Baby, Honey, Sweetie, Love, and Sugar' twice. It makes it sound really neat. This first part is really sweet so far..

Amme1212