Reviews for Red Profound
ladymaverick chapter 1 . 4/14/2003
Very strong. I like the arrangement of the stanzas, and the rhyming pattern does work - it's not forced. "As she screamed her soul raw" - pretty damn powerful. Perhaps for improvement, you can shorten the poem even more, stick to the bare minimum to really capture the essence - the pain. Other than that I think this poem is incredible. Keep up the good work...hope to be reading some more of your work soon. Cheers.