Reviews for Memoriam
Curdled conscience chapter 1 . 10/9/2006
Hey. That's a great piece, though I don't understand the phrase 'evening's thrust'. Or maybe its just me. I love all your work at FiresAndFlowers, especially the stories about Atlassa Redfern. If you could review my (crappy) work, I would love it. Yeah. I
Ellie101 chapter 1 . 7/17/2006
Lovely. Especially adored the last bit: "They coat my skin... And cannot tell which of us is alive."
Takishia chapter 1 . 10/28/2005
Love the poetry. Especially end. :)And cannot tell which of us/Is alive

Takishia (tracing-tt)
xxPoPdAnCeRxx chapter 1 . 7/28/2005
nice poem real kol
Amethyst Blood chapter 1 . 7/8/2003
...good job. It pretty good for one f your first poems. Um, some bits need to flow a bit more, but the imagery's awsome and it's a very nice poem.

-AB
Cianna Greenwood chapter 1 . 6/3/2003
Awesome. Almost disturbing in its intensity...

You should write more serious poetry. I'm serious. (Lame joke, I know. I couldn't help myself)
Kelpylion chapter 1 . 4/27/2003
I know the feeling...you captured it very...poetically. Nice piece.
Brooke ORiley chapter 1 . 4/25/2003
wow...i likes. 'tis definitely interesting. kinda spooky, too. but good! you should keep it up! not that poetry can generally be written on a whim, but if you can, go for it!