This was an amazing story, with a very unusual ending :L I thought it was really good, even though in some places it was kinda difficult to tell who was actually narating the story. It was very different from any other studentXteacher I've read before, but it was epicstuff all the same. I enjoyed it, keep writing :) x

Wow thats amazing

please check my stories!

Ick, what the fuck? Are people supposed to get off to this? I wonder if it's like a psychological disorder that humans have or something. it's disgusting.

This is very well written.

But I must say it is very hard to understand what Jessica means in her relationship with Mr. Williamson.

Does she want to be with him?

What happened that "one night"

I just do not know what to say. This terrified me to the very bone, and I didn't finish it.

What a sick twisted story.

Very well written though.

Lots of planning was evident.

“I keep an eye out, though, because there's another killer in town. Maybe we could meet and compare notes? “

A twisted version of a comic relief. I like it.

“Parents teach their little girls to fear exposure; to fear loss of control. I will feed both monsters. “

I think that was a great line.

Hm... and I sick and twisted for liking the plot of this story?

wow... i think i'm very confused. did jessica truly want him to be with her? was she waiting? and how did she ruin his life? i'm confused. but you have an amazing language that kept me intrigued til the end. congrats.

ARF! ARF! I shed all over you and your shaggy dog ending. :P

This is an upsetting story and I really understand why you put it in the category it is... I don't think I've ever read anything this... revolting before. You're a great writer and you have a great language... I didn't read the whole story since it just got too out of hand for me to read. But I'm sure that other people who are more into these types of stories will appreciate it more than me.