Reviews for Love Me Deeply |
---|
![]() ![]() ![]() wow, i have to admit i dont hate alex anymore, i hated him in the beginning but now i dont. update soon its awesome so far. |
![]() ![]() Please write more |
![]() ![]() ![]() okay, this is well written, however, chapter 2 has hit a sort of weak spot. The explanation about Randy's little brother being the captor seems rushed and illogical. I think if you were to go back and fill in some of the story line at this point, it would make more sense. It is fine as it is, but it lacks "twist". You gave what could have been major plot twist away right there. Obviously you have your own story in mind... but that was my first impression, I thought, "now wait a minute, how did that happen." Also, your dialogue is Very good. I applaud you on your realistic dialogue. Nice work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great update! Now for another one! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, new chapter! I like it. Although I get the feeling that it's going to end horribly. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, this is fantastic. I hope you continue it, I'd love to find out what happens. |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was cool but its really weird that she might fall for a guy who did that, shit, if i wouldve been waiting outside the door for him with something to hit him with. but i do wanna read more so out of the ditch! hehe ~*steph*~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() *starts praying* |
![]() ![]() ![]() My god this story is incredible...you are the kind of author everyone dreams Of becoming...and seeing as you are so experienced would you mind reading my three lousy fics I wrote search for Armadelus Demien, now back to me babbling foolishly about how damned good this story is...its even better than a movie...you could just as well be the next stephen king. You are a perfect artist in detail and suspense oh yes...add more chapters! what happens to Alex and clover does clover ever fall into a true love with him? |
![]() ![]() ![]() that is so awesome. it couldnt be better |
![]() ![]() ![]() I cant wait for the next chapter in this story, Its getting pretty interesting, |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great plot! I'd love to see the finished story! Write more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, this chapter was really good. Thank God ur a good author who updates fast. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this story is getting so good, and its great that u add new chapters so quickly keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG HOW CAN U LEAVE US THERE!GRR, THIS STORY IS SOO GOOD. PlEaSe uPdAtE Soon! |