|Reviews for The blood of five and the fall of Egypt|
| Lori chapter 2 . 11/9/2013
I don't even know if you still use this account, but I had to tell how much I loved this and wish it would continue. Maybe you have it written somewhere else, I don't know... But this is great.
| ACID-0.00-Hanafubuki chapter 2 . 11/27/2012
Ive never really liked Cleopatra lol good story though
| Hi chapter 2 . 1/20/2011
More sex please... And i love the moaning and desire with aRsinoe... Sex
| Blind Scribe chapter 2 . 11/27/2007
I thought Ptolemy was a cute, innocent little angel...guess not. Apparently he was obese. Sad really. I read about him first in the Bartimaeus trilogy (Ptolemy's Gate) and I thought he was the best thing ever...but then again, it may have been a different Ptolemy.
There were quite a couple of them...
Nice touch. Great story.
| Arej chapter 2 . 9/25/2005
Okay, same thing, which Cleopatra?
Anyway, there were a few mechanical errors, but not many. Keep working.
| Arej chapter 1 . 9/25/2005
okay, wow. Just one question- which Cleopatra?
Interesting descriptions, and that guy-Pothinus- is an absolute ass.
| First Lady chapter 2 . 7/19/2004
This is fantastic. I LOVE Ancient Egypt, have been obsessed since I was only five. This story makes those leathery mummies real people with real thoughts and emotions... and desires... *smirk* Please continue writing.
| Isis of the Nile chapter 2 . 7/5/2004
Um...I wanna know what happens. I asked for an update, so please! THis is such a good story that doesn't deserve to be abandoned! WHat happens to Ptomeley? Cleo's sis? Her lover? AH...i'm dying with anticipation!
| Isis of the Nile chapter 1 . 6/9/2004
Update? Hello! I...need...an...update!
| NightShadow13 chapter 2 . 5/2/2004
Yeahness! Right more! *throws pinapples at Ptolemy* Icky! Go away! Hiss...
| not to be sarcastic chapter 2 . 2/21/2004
| Aleksa chapter 2 . 1/31/2004
I'm glad you decided to continue with this story...Please add more chapters..Soon! :)
| dakota chapter 2 . 1/18/2004
it's about time you updated. i'll send you ur cookie in the mail... great chapter
| JustDuck chapter 2 . 1/5/2004
Oh what the hell, I'll just review each chapter.
Again, well done!
Remind me again, besides the inter-palace politics, how are Pothinus and Arsinoe connected?
EEk. Incest. Well, it happened, and there's nothing you can do about it. Ifyou ignore the past, it will return with vengence.
| JustDuck chapter 1 . 1/5/2004
This is a powerful beginning. Usually I wait until I have read all the available chapters before posting - but I had to let you know how much I enjoyed this first chapter!
I am a great fan of ancient Egyptian history, and I appreciate your attention to historical detail! Bravo!