Interesting. I like the way you write - I like the way you get into people's characters in a very short space, and the way it has a quality of realness to it. And the different times work very well.

A good prologue. No, not the most original way to begin a story, but very good nevertheless.
Let's see, there was a degree of characterisation even in so short a space, and certainly an air of mystery and intrigue that makes me want to read on.

My, my, where have I been? A new chapter (focusing on Aurion!) has been up for weeks and I didn't notice? Too much eggnog already. XD
Anyway, I enjoyed this chapter very much. It is sad to see Nefertarin finally choose her brother over Aurion, but it was always clear that she would have to make a decision someday. (I am, of course, assuming she doesn't change her mind later on . . . )
I like the situation that's being set up; I can smell more Aurion vs Talanion conflict coming this way, even in the face of a mysterious impending attack.

This is so cool...about the only other thing I'd have to say would be that reading all 72 chapters would take me a while, but I will, make no mistake!
Have you considered having this published? Just a question...also, did you get my email (from the account that is)? Thanks.

cool prologue. it will take me time to read all this.. but hopefully i will. tata. *TI*

omg!1 they have found out! wats going to ahppen! obviously both arnt taking it all too well... :P...but then agen..who would!
damn..wats going to happen? wat are the others going to think?

wow! the story is going GOOD! the plot is getting really interesting and the charcters..well..we will find out more about them later on..*cheeky laugh*
going back to read more!

very confusing at the moment...but i guess everything will be explained later yea?

wow...a very dark and negative start to the story..but nevertheless...i have a feeling this story is going to be really interesting to read!
hope im rite!
to reading for me! _

Ah hah! I was wondering where this chapter was in my stack of reviews to catch up on! _ I'm quite happy I was able to get to it now.
Werecat, you have such a beautiful style of writing. I know I've said it before (many times before) but I just can't get over it. I get lost in your writing, with your characters.
But now, of course, I am wondering just what it is that Nefertarin and Talanion are supposed to do. I assume that where they are going will finish what they were born for . . . I know I could be wrong, but it just has that FEEL. I really can't wait (despite my long absences!). _~
matta ne,
LoK

*its nice to finally read some of your work. I heard about you from Sekhmet*
I really enjoy the plot you've created; it is simply rock-solid. Everything is approached with knowledge of ancient civilizations, as well as herb lore. I found that there was not much description for setting, but I realize that you are trying to express this as more of a tale. Not too big a deal. Anyway, I can already see things falling into place, and it sounds very interesting. I plan to continue reading!
Lion Rose _

Hi! I liked your drawing of the lovers' embrace at your website. So I read this cool chapter. Please write more.

hey there!
oh my, interesting cliffie.. Aurion, Tal n Nef on a journey together. I can just envision the sizzling between them..
Feranion is such a dependable person. You can count on him to be cool-headed and rational. Like his character alot!
Can't believe Tal is STILL jealous of Aurion.. didn't his sister openly voice out her choice? Gah. Jealous git.
can't wait to read the part when their powers combine eh.. as told in the Prophecy ;) that will be cool
RK

Hmm... I'm wondering, werecat. When are you going to connect this story to the one with Feranion and the lumarin woman? I thought that when he first awakened, that would have been the best time for him to say something of the like to Feranion... but of course, he didn't. *sighs* I love seeing Tal get double-teamed. He acts so helpless when it happens! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! I can only imagine what will occur on their journey...
-Yusef "The B.A.T." Pittman
P.S.- one of your shorter chapters in a long while, but good nonetheless

Yay, a new chapter, and sooner then I expected as well. It's still going a bit slow, but it's enough to keep me full until the next chapter. I bet the trip with Aurion and Talanion will just be HOURS of fun... :P