Reviews for The Stars Are Out Tonight
Dbnichols chapter 26 . 2/25/2015
Great story!
Jenny Jean W-B chapter 26 . 8/18/2011
Awesome story!
monkeyface1 chapter 26 . 7/6/2011
this story was amazing i truly appreciate you making it. itwas amazing! and i read all chapters like twice because it was amazing thank you so much!
moneyface1 chapter 1 . 6/30/2011
this is a great story! and i cant beleave he still wanted he even though she has a kid. hes right he is a gentlemen!
Kelly Rogala chapter 26 . 5/19/2011
I enjoyed this book very much, now time for the next one :)
smurf-love chapter 22 . 2/8/2011
ok im sorry but you can get temporary diabetes while your pregnant, its totally fine and goes away after the birth. it also means you can get it later in life but she would be in the hospital for low blood sugar not pains in her tummy. sometimes you need to look up facts before you write about medical stuff like this
shhsilence chapter 12 . 7/26/2010
While I like the story, I have to point out that fresh from a car crash with busted up ribs he would not be lifting anything let alone Lizzie...
Aradia Cloud chapter 7 . 6/14/2010
This is unrealistic. It's too perfect. And things are moving WAY too fast.
Cajun-hick chapter 26 . 5/6/2010
That was very cute! I loved it!
AndItMovesUsAll chapter 26 . 1/31/2010
Aww i really liked that epilogue, it was weird but amazing seeing Aiden grown up, and now im curious about his life. I have to admit i considered stopping reading this story at a few points because though i think the idea and the plot was amazing and makes for a great story, it progressed very quickly without much character development, or much time just building on Hayden and Lizzies relationship, and by that i mean that werent really any great conversations with them getting to know eachother, they just seemed to jump into it, and know that your probably thinking 99% of this is purely just them interacting, which is true, but because of the fast pace, and the many '6 weeks later...'s you dont really get to know them as people and as a couple, and it's very hard to get into the story, because although the events are exiting and emotional, it feels like your just being given the facts and seeing the surface of their relationship. Sorry that was a ridiculously long sentence. Also, it seemed unrealistic that they said they loved eachother so quickly, and i think it was the first 13 chapters in general that seemed to fly by.

That sounds like a lot of critism but i did enjoy it, it as has so much going on and i think this book has massive potential, (sorry about the condescendingness) it just needs 'fattening up' a bit, if you get what i mean lol. :D

I am pretty curious about the next books entail, so i'll proabably check them out..
deathanddawn chapter 1 . 12/11/2009

stumbled upon this story and... well... i love it! although, they kinda got things moving slightly (.~) faster than usual... well, sorta.


drummercc chapter 1 . 8/8/2009
very abrupt change in character emotions. thats all :D
May Ravn chapter 26 . 8/4/2009
This is the second time I've read your story. I like it, but I think it's going a bit too fast like it is hurried or something... Otherwise, nice plot!


reader chapter 1 . 6/25/2009
Wow, what if he were a serial killer or something. Way to go, secretary.

This sounds like it'll be fun, but I think the secrets were bared too soon and the relationship started too fast, which doesn't allow the first chapter to capture reader interest as much as it could have.
hater of reality chapter 13 . 6/25/2009
omg i love golden retrievers

i can't beleive he got her a car.

i love your stories.
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