|Reviews for Dark Love|
| LiNdSaY.AP chapter 10 . 12/31/2003
what happened to sebastian? did he just . . . die? you have a great plot/story/everything here, but you might want to describe things in some more detail . . . it all just goes by too fast.
| TheSpy chapter 7 . 7/14/2003
I have to say that this was a very good idea, and that you seemed to have a grasp of what you wanted, but to me it seemed a littler to corny and predictable.
| NthNinth chapter 16 . 6/30/2003
it is a great chapter, but it sounds a bit weird to have him trying to impress melanie as a fault :)
| Shi Maxwell chapter 13 . 6/21/2003
Interesting- You could use a bit more detail but I like it.
| missliss89 chapter 12 . 6/14/2003
i love the way you write - i cant wait for the next chappie - whos this new guy that taps melanie?
| NthNinth chapter 12 . 6/14/2003
aw, a short chapter :( Its still good though! :) update soon
| NthNinth chapter 10 . 6/5/2003
very good, but everything happens so quickly!
| missliss89 chapter 9 . 5/23/2003
aw... so cute - cant wait til the next chapter to see what happenes next!
| Xelena chapter 8 . 5/5/2003
i really like this story- continue, onegai..
| Xelena chapter 6 . 4/27/2003
i really liked this chapter although it could have been a bit longer. anyways, please continue
| Xelena chapter 5 . 4/22/2003
i like it, it's very easy to read which makes it thoroughly enjoying. however, there is one thing- it's kinda confusing at points- so if you could just try to write a little more clearly then it'd be excellent.
| Hayley chapter 5 . 4/22/2003
Wow! You are such a good updater! The story is getting better and better! I love vampires!
| Mountain Peak chapter 5 . 4/22/2003
The only constructive critizism that I can possibly think of is to lengthen your chapters, escpecially chapthers 23 (I think)
Please add on as son as you can
Can't wait to read the rest!
| Hayley chapter 3 . 4/20/2003
Good chapter, it's a good continuation of the first one. But did you know that you posted the second chapter twice, and that the third one is missing? Maybe you should look into that.
| Xelena chapter 1 . 4/18/2003
i liek the beginning though it's a little on the short side. please continue