Reviews for Melancholy
Aurora Barrett chapter 1 . 6/21/2003
I like that a lot... in a weird, odd way... hm... I like ur writing style...

~Aurora Barrett~
JBJ 18 chapter 1 . 6/8/2003
nice job, like this one alot
phillie chapter 1 . 5/31/2003
That is a great poem. It is very emotional although those were great choices of words. Overall Great Great Great!
Shaun O'Rourke chapter 1 . 5/6/2003
freaky thought... dying since the day you were born. living for death is ironic, but some may argue that life is the most painful part of death... any other cliches you want me to throw at you, just ask.
Horace Gold chapter 1 . 4/24/2003
Prima! excellent choice of words, and great imagery created with things like 'portal' very eerie...

Vellicito del dio e di buona notte,

Lazarus de Medci IV
Blue SunriZe chapter 1 . 4/19/2003
This poem is so true. Nice job. When you can, please come review some of my writings.