Reviews for The Fire Within
Midian Dawn chapter 4 . 7/24/2003
aww the story is great
wacka dkid chapter 4 . 5/7/2003
i thought there would be one more chappie but no. its an author's notice.. so sad. you wanna know what that means? you have to update son. really soon. k? yay. -krissa
The-Mighty-Koshi chapter 4 . 5/2/2003
Course I understand. Take as much time out as you need to so when you come back you can fully give us readers the best chapter possible.



p. your friend my sympathies and well wishes for her father to get better.
Eman Hashmi chapter 3 . 5/1/2003
hey, when u updating this story? i dunno how many times i've come to check if u've updated! just wondering u know...u have a really interesting story and i really want to see how it will turn out.
The-Mighty-Koshi chapter 3 . 4/26/2003
Wonderful dialoge its so realistic and you know what I have to say now...write more chapters!


The-Mighty-Koshi chapter 2 . 4/26/2003
The very female part oh boy I liked that! It so funny and human-like too... so keep writing more chapters please!
Leah Claire chapter 3 . 4/21/2003
*applauds*. Heh. I got two chapters in one go. That made me happy.

I like the pace that the story is developing at.
Drifting Dreamer chapter 3 . 4/21/2003
have i mentioned that i'm really happy i decided to read this? because i'm loving it more and more. honestly! this story is absolutely amazing!

write more soon!
Yanagi chapter 3 . 4/21/2003
Wah! Blade-san... that was a little short. T_T Write more. _
Yanagi chapter 2 . 4/21/2003
Very naked indeed! I love your story and I'm adding it to my faves. _ Gad... *imagines a naked man running around her house* That's scarier. ;;
Yanagi chapter 1 . 4/21/2003
WOW! Very interesting. Is Marcos the conservative type? ; hehe
Eman Hashmi chapter 2 . 4/20/2003
good job! keep writing! u've got good control over the writing and i love ur characterization of marcos.
D.M chapter 2 . 4/20/2003
keep going
Drifting Dreamer chapter 2 . 4/19/2003
yes! now i'm really glad that i read your story! this is awesome! congrats on a great story, this is deffienlty going into my favorites list.

but um... why are powerful females so rare? just a thought, keep up the good work!
Eruialiwen chapter 1 . 4/19/2003
SISSA! See, I told you you could write fantasy! You seem a natural at it already. This chapter is full of mystery and intrigue, as well as a dark, almost tangible sensuality. Great going so far-you have hooked me immediately; the lore and knowledge of the mages and Academy I want to know more about! And with the abrupt introduction of the glowing girl, I want to read more NOW! As Trevor would say...w00t!
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