Reviews for The Fire Within
The-Mighty-Koshi chapter 1 . 4/19/2003
A very nice chapter here. I really like how you planned out this thing. And I really urge you to continue so, see you at the next chapter!


Eman Hashmi chapter 1 . 4/19/2003
nice story! i like the way u set the story up. this young marcos seems, to me, that he will grow up into one of those stuffy old mages! but there's a change here with the girl. story is intriguing. update soon!
Leah Claire chapter 1 . 4/19/2003

That was really good! I'm captivated. I truly hope you add-on soon.
SilverDragoness chapter 1 . 4/18/2003
Great! This story is quite good, much better than most, and it's most definately going on my favorites list!
Drifting Dreamer chapter 1 . 4/18/2003
wow. this is really interesting. i admit, that i had my doubts, but i'm glad that i read this. good job, and keep the story coming.
you'llneverknow chapter 1 . 4/18/2003
This is one of the best stories I have read! I like that it has a good sense of humor as well as a strong start to a story. Keep up the good work. I can't wait to read more.
EnednilwenShannon chapter 1 . 4/18/2003
*interest captured* Please write more! Your works are so good, you really have a talent!
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