Reviews for Unleashed
eldrin chapter 1 . 4/19/2003
ah...this almost makes me cry.
aleppine chapter 1 . 4/19/2003
Gorgeous. The use of 'here, by the side of the road' at both the start and the beginning is very effective - something I also love doing. There are so many things I like in this, I gotta pick a few or else write an essay .. *rereads* The first line - throwing up innocence - very suggestive and fitting metaphor. The deception that he was nice described as in the form of a pill - again, good choice of wording, also suggestive. 'Die with the words 'forgive me' on my breath' ... now that is great. Dramatic. Great work.
PlayMateMisfit chapter 1 . 4/19/2003
wow, i really like this :) it's so good, in a creepy way -lol-. keep writing

~misfit
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